Wednesday, July 15, 2020
My poetry
Hi viewers, this holiday Phil sent us a challenge to do if we were bored during holidays. I was not bored in the holidays but i still wanted to have a go at it. The challenge was to make our own poetry so i decided to make a poetry about Lock down. My poetry is called Lock down also and I wanted to share it with you guys so I can show what I have been making during the school holidays. I worked really hard on this poetry and I put lots of effort into this. So i'm really proud of my self. Also this is the first time i have made my own made poetry. Hope you guys enjoy it. Here is my poetry!
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Ka pai Kali. I'm so glad you decided to try some poetry. I love writing poems but never tried until last year! Could you just change the permissions on your video so that we can see it?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Kali,
ReplyDeletewe would have liked to have read your poem but we couldn't see the video.
Please can you change the sharing so we can view it.
Thanks
Rimu Hub @ Ormond School.
Thanks for the tip. I have change it so everyone can see it. Hope you enjoy!
DeleteKia ora Kali. Thanks for changing the settings. I love the poem. I like how you thought about lockdown from other people's perspectives. did you check out the other poems? My tip would be to speak a bit slower so it's easier for people to understand.
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